In the produce aisle of the Publix, I find pears from Argentina.
Problems that need correcting:
a) muddy bowl
c) color balance: the background is too dark or the table too light by comparison.
Things that can't be corrected:
a) positioning of the pears in the foreground. They looked pasted on.
b) the dividing line between surface and background should have been higher or lower rather than cutting the picture in half.
What I'm OK with:
a) the stems.
b) open brushwork
(I have substituted a better photo, tues. 7/24)